Help save my son!

Show us your fanfic, original stories, poems, etc
Post Reply
User avatar
Varthikes
Lieutenant Commander
Lieutenant Commander
Posts: 925
Joined: Mon Jul 16, 2007 11:40 pm
Commendations: The Daystrom Award
Location: Somewhere out there...

Help save my son!

Post by Varthikes »

Okay, it isn't MY son. It's my namesake's son.

I'm just seeking any suggestions.

At this point in the novel I'm currently working on, the characters are trying to save the main dragon character's (Varthikes) unhatched son, whose egg was cracked prematurely in a recent fight. The suggestion is put forth to put the pre-hatchling in an incubator (similar to the ones used for premature Human babies, but modified) set to simulate the egg's environment.

The pre-hatchling is to be put in stasis while the incubator is prepared. Then, he'll be transferred from the egg to the modified incubator (was that what that was in ENT's "Similitude" in which Phlox grew the Trip-clone?)

Again, just looking for any helpful suggestions.

:)
"What has been done has been done and cannot be undone."--Ruth, All the Weyrs of Pern
"Dragons can't change who they are, and who would want them to? Dragons are powerful, amazing creatures."--Hiccup, Dragons: Riders of Berk
shran
Commander
Commander
Posts: 1289
Joined: Wed Jul 18, 2007 6:28 pm
Contact:

Re: Help save my son!

Post by shran »

Can the hatchling survive outside the egg? A premature birth may be an option.
Reconstructing the eggs shell from different materials, or other egg shells may help to preserve the egg as well, perhaps.
Constroctung a poreuse, yet isolating structure around the egg by using all sorts of materials at hand.
What technology level are we looking at? It may help to expand our options.
'Welding' the egg cracks to let it seal again, if possible without damaging the pre-hatchling.
If possible dragons can survive this, can the egg be put in cryostasis?
Sionnach Glic
4 Star Admiral
4 Star Admiral
Posts: 26014
Joined: Fri Jul 13, 2007 10:58 pm
Location: Poblacht na hÉireann, Baile Átha Cliath

Re: Help save my son!

Post by Sionnach Glic »

Perhaps wrapping it in some sort of water-proof material quickly might help. That would prevent vital fluids leaking out.
"You've all been selected for this mission because you each have a special skill. Professor Hawking, John Leslie, Phil Neville, the Wu-Tang Clan, Usher, the Sugar Puffs Monster and Daniel Day-Lewis! Welcome to Operation MindFuck!"
User avatar
Varthikes
Lieutenant Commander
Lieutenant Commander
Posts: 925
Joined: Mon Jul 16, 2007 11:40 pm
Commendations: The Daystrom Award
Location: Somewhere out there...

Re: Help save my son!

Post by Varthikes »

shran wrote:Can the hatchling survive outside the egg? A premature birth may be an option.
The hatchling is relatively fully formed (all of his vital organs are formed), but still too fragile to survive outside. Especially on his own. Perhaps with medical intervention.
What technology level are we looking at? It may help to expand our options.
The technology is about two hundred years ahead of ours today.
If possible dragons can survive this, can the egg be put in cryostasis?
That's what the doctors were going to do while they prepare an environment where the young dragon can finish developing.
"What has been done has been done and cannot be undone."--Ruth, All the Weyrs of Pern
"Dragons can't change who they are, and who would want them to? Dragons are powerful, amazing creatures."--Hiccup, Dragons: Riders of Berk
Mark
4 Star Admiral
4 Star Admiral
Posts: 17671
Joined: Fri Jul 18, 2008 12:49 am
Location: Honolulu, Hawaii

Re: Help save my son!

Post by Mark »

How about coating the cracks with some kind of rare poxy? Could be a whole sub plot to obtain said stuff.
They say that in the Army,
the women are mighty fine.
They look like Phyllis Diller,
and walk like Frankenstein.
User avatar
Varthikes
Lieutenant Commander
Lieutenant Commander
Posts: 925
Joined: Mon Jul 16, 2007 11:40 pm
Commendations: The Daystrom Award
Location: Somewhere out there...

Re: Help save my son!

Post by Varthikes »

Saving the young dragon is already a subplot.
"What has been done has been done and cannot be undone."--Ruth, All the Weyrs of Pern
"Dragons can't change who they are, and who would want them to? Dragons are powerful, amazing creatures."--Hiccup, Dragons: Riders of Berk
Tsukiyumi
4 Star Admiral
4 Star Admiral
Posts: 21747
Joined: Fri Oct 12, 2007 2:38 pm
Location: Forward Torpedo Tube Twenty. Help!
Contact:

Re: Help save my son!

Post by Tsukiyumi »

Sub-subplot?
There is only one way of avoiding the war – that is the overthrow of this society. However, as we are too weak for this task, the war is inevitable. -L. Trotsky, 1939
User avatar
Reliant121
3 Star Admiral
3 Star Admiral
Posts: 12263
Joined: Thu Jul 26, 2007 5:00 pm

Re: Help save my son!

Post by Reliant121 »

Thats gonna get complicated. I can see numerous primary, secondary, tertiary and auxiliary plots on the way :P
Mark
4 Star Admiral
4 Star Admiral
Posts: 17671
Joined: Fri Jul 18, 2008 12:49 am
Location: Honolulu, Hawaii

Re: Help save my son!

Post by Mark »

Just like finding the guide to lead you to the map, which tells you how to find the key, to unlock the magical door to retrieve the magic sword, so you can slay the dragon, so you can save the princess :mrgreen:
They say that in the Army,
the women are mighty fine.
They look like Phyllis Diller,
and walk like Frankenstein.
User avatar
Reliant121
3 Star Admiral
3 Star Admiral
Posts: 12263
Joined: Thu Jul 26, 2007 5:00 pm

Re: Help save my son!

Post by Reliant121 »

bleh, damn damsels.
Mark
4 Star Admiral
4 Star Admiral
Posts: 17671
Joined: Fri Jul 18, 2008 12:49 am
Location: Honolulu, Hawaii

Re: Help save my son!

Post by Mark »

Alas, little brother, it is a cliche that has us trapped 8)
They say that in the Army,
the women are mighty fine.
They look like Phyllis Diller,
and walk like Frankenstein.
Tsukiyumi
4 Star Admiral
4 Star Admiral
Posts: 21747
Joined: Fri Oct 12, 2007 2:38 pm
Location: Forward Torpedo Tube Twenty. Help!
Contact:

Re: Help save my son!

Post by Tsukiyumi »

Reliant121 wrote:bleh, damn damsels.
Thus why I only like women who can do more than shriek in a real fight. 8)
There is only one way of avoiding the war – that is the overthrow of this society. However, as we are too weak for this task, the war is inevitable. -L. Trotsky, 1939
User avatar
Varthikes
Lieutenant Commander
Lieutenant Commander
Posts: 925
Joined: Mon Jul 16, 2007 11:40 pm
Commendations: The Daystrom Award
Location: Somewhere out there...

Re: Help save my son!

Post by Varthikes »

Mark wrote:Just like finding the guide to lead you to the map, which tells you how to find the key, to unlock the magical door to retrieve the magic sword, so you can slay the dragon, so you can save the princess :mrgreen:
We'll just have the dragon eat you and call it a day. :D
"What has been done has been done and cannot be undone."--Ruth, All the Weyrs of Pern
"Dragons can't change who they are, and who would want them to? Dragons are powerful, amazing creatures."--Hiccup, Dragons: Riders of Berk
Mark
4 Star Admiral
4 Star Admiral
Posts: 17671
Joined: Fri Jul 18, 2008 12:49 am
Location: Honolulu, Hawaii

Re: Help save my son!

Post by Mark »

Before I find the guide please. Save me a HUGE headache :mrgreen:
They say that in the Army,
the women are mighty fine.
They look like Phyllis Diller,
and walk like Frankenstein.
Post Reply