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I've worked it out sort of. Tell me what you guys think.

I agree with the comments in the sign-in thread; even during the mission, bear in mind that there will be some distrust.

Which can be uncomfortable for a character, but great for RP, BTW.

Ok......I've edited Jair and toned him down a bit. What do you all think now?

I like it. You did a good job of making both useful to the Empire as well as not being a threat in giving them a reason to spare him. Makes him look to the Empire more like a Force Sensitive then a former failed Jedi Patawan.

I say this guy counts as a "Go" in my book. Anyone object?

Cool with me.

Good with me
And adds some nice characteristics to his personality. Like the begging for his life part I liked

Jair Dax is now born. Ok if I post soon then???

Monroe, can we just call the battle for the Frigate over with? We were in firm control. Stormtroopers held the shuttlebay. My squad held the core and blocked off the bridge. Plus their fighter support was badly out gunned and would no doubt soon run for dear life.

Post in an after action report for us so we can move on and get some speed back in our RP. Also the debrief would allow everyone to pick up from the same spot.

Sure, I had kind of assumed it was over with. I guess that may have been the hold up my bad.

What would work better, if one of you guys write an introduction for me, or I do my own??? Should I wait for this after action report???

Mark wrote:What would work better, if one of you guys write an introduction for me, or I do my own??? Should I wait for this after action report???

I'm typing the report now. You can have your character arrive with the reinforcements (that the report mentions) and report to Rochey's character.

Cool. Sounds good.

Rochey, would you like to post my character's reporting to you? I don't feel I have a grip on you guys characters well enough yet to post involving them yet.

Deep - if the "jockey" you referred to was me, I'm Starfighter Corps - not Navy.