Comments/criticisms/suggestions on my SW/ST crossovers

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Comments/criticisms/suggestions on my SW/ST crossovers

Post by RK_Striker_JK_5 »

Hey, all. With the posting of my new fic 'Measure of a Droid', I figure I might need a thread for basically... what do you think? Am I doing a good job with merging SW and ST? What criticisms do you have for my work? Do you have suggestions for later works?

I should note I've got 3-4 more ideas for fics.

Anything would be helpful as I continue to attempt to improve. Thanks. :)

EDIT:

My fics for easy perusal:

Where no Jedi Has Gone Before

Measure of a Droid

Aggressive Negotiations

Encounter at Centerpoint
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Post by Vic »

Much like TOS your writing is character driven, I pretty much like it for that alone. You put just enough tech nerd love in to it while not falling into the pissing contest that could happen all to easily. All in all.... :cheers:!
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Post by stitch626 »

I agree. You give enough character focus that we can attach ourselves to all of them, even the ones we hate.

And yet, your story is not lacking, which makes for a very thoughtful and entertaining read.
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Post by RK_Striker_JK_5 »

Vic, Stitch, thanks for responding. I'm glad I've been able to keep this a 'true' crossover and not a versus.

Does anyone have any suggestions for plots or things they'd like to see me write for this series?
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Post by Foxfyre »

I like how you have manged to inlcude just about every aspect of both universes in them. Maybe bring the more of the minor characters out a bit more.
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