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Uh....maybe....
The last time I spoke Spanish was when I was in Spain a couple of years ago. :)
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Yeah, it's not incorrect, it's just a huge flashing red sign that says i'm a first year spanish student... :P

Had i really wanted to have good grammar and punctuation, i would have said:

¡Deseo el capítulo ocho!
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Very much the same as any other inflected language. The subject is implied in the conjugation, and is therefore not incorrect, but often left out for the sake of brevity and ease of speaking.
I can't stand nothing dull
I got the high gloss luster
I'll massacre your ass as fast
as Bull offed Custer
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Rochey wrote:
Excellent!
Thank you. :)
It had a very Black Hawk Down feel to it, a realistic depiction of the confusion of the firefight,
Thanks. It seems hours of watching war movies finaly came in good for something.
and an officer who was actually controlling his unit's fire. Most un-Trek like,
I know, I half expected the universe to implode as I wrote those words...
When's chapter 8 expected?
No idea. :lol:
Hopefuly no longer than a couple of weeks.
Loved it yet again! But I don't think I could wait a couple of weeks! You're killing me! :lol:
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Post by Sionnach Glic »

Sorry, but I'm a bit busier in real life than I was before. I might have it up by the end of this week, but no promises. :)
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The pain the pain of it all! Well not really, its not like i'm going to cut out my eyes with a brouch but still! lol :lol:
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If you cut your eyes out, you wouldn't be able to read it when I finaly get around to posting the next bit. :P
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Hummm...... (plants a bomb in your ship's bar) :twisted:
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*Dives into the captain's yacht to escape.......again*
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*Finds that his ship has no engines*
"Yeah, I thought about that one already and i've never forgiven you for that!"
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Where is chapter 8!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :party:
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Post by Sionnach Glic »

My writing has been put on hold for a while. My computer crashed a couple of weeks ago, and I lost all my MS Word notes, so I've completely forgotten what the hell I was going to do next. Ditto for my other story. I'll try to get something up by Christmass, or sometime around then.
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I KNOW WHO IS TO BLAME! :evil:

KHANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!

KHANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!

KHANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!
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Post by Sionnach Glic »

Well, I've finaly gotten back to writing! :)

Sorry for the....um....few months long delay. Problem is, the notes I lost in the crash also included some pretty important stuff that I've now forgotten, so I no longer know exactly where I was going with some of the plots I'd set up. I know the overall direction of where it was going, but none of the details other than that, so I'm going to have to re-invent the story on the fly.
Anyway, I hope to have the next chapter up this weekend. :)
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Post by Monroe »

So erm.. what exactly did you mean by this weekend? I'm going to have to reread it again to know where you left off!
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