Deepcrush wrote:The shields seem a little to strong for my taste. But, then again, given the time and size... it might not be a bad stretch.
Overall, I love all the detail you have in this.
I toned down the weapons but left the shields where they were. They're definitely over where a simple scale up of a Sovereign would be.
Rochey wrote:Just read through it all now. I'm looking forward to more.
I'm the same. Whenever I'm writing, I have to work everything out before hand.
Fiddling with the details also gives me something to do when I want to work on the story but don't feel like writing.
I'm fighting the urge I usually have to pester anyone I can for details on what they liked, didn't like, etc.