Proud Leigon Specs and discussion

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Re: Proud Legion

Postby Tyyr » Sun May 03, 2009 2:24 am

Deepcrush wrote:The shields seem a little to strong for my taste. But, then again, given the time and size... it might not be a bad stretch.

Overall, I love all the detail you have in this.

I toned down the weapons but left the shields where they were. They're definitely over where a simple scale up of a Sovereign would be.

Rochey wrote:Just read through it all now. I'm looking forward to more. :)

I'm the same. Whenever I'm writing, I have to work everything out before hand.

Fiddling with the details also gives me something to do when I want to work on the story but don't feel like writing.

I'm fighting the urge I usually have to pester anyone I can for details on what they liked, didn't like, etc.
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Re: Proud Legion

Postby Deepcrush » Sun May 03, 2009 6:12 am

Tyyr wrote:I toned down the weapons but left the shields where they were. They're definitely over where a simple scale up of a Sovereign would be.


See, I liked the weapons but was unsure about the shields.
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Re: Proud Legion

Postby Tyyr » Wed May 06, 2009 3:01 am

I'll take it into consideration. Nothing is set in stone just yet.

I updated the specs with the small craft and fighters of the Monsoon.
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Re: Proud Legion

Postby Tsukiyumi » Wed May 06, 2009 3:24 am

Tyyr wrote:...I updated the specs with the small craft and fighters of the Monsoon.


Personally, I'd suggest putting all the stats in a separate thread called "Proud Legion Specs" or somesuch. It would make it easier to check the specs while reading the story. :)
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Re: Proud Legion

Postby Tyyr » Wed May 06, 2009 3:50 am

Probably not a bad idea. Not used to posting fic in a forum.
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Re: Proud Legion

Postby Tsukiyumi » Wed May 06, 2009 4:50 am

Tyyr wrote:Probably not a bad idea. Not used to posting fic in a forum.


Just a suggestion. :wink:
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Proud Legion

Postby Deepcrush » Fri May 08, 2009 9:23 am

Thats a good idea. IF possible, could a mod split the threads to move ideas about the specs with the specs to a home of their own.
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Re: Proud Legion

Postby Tyyr » Fri May 08, 2009 11:58 am

Yes, please do.

Maybe one thread with just the fic and another "Proud Legion Specs & Discussion"?
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Proud Leigon Specs and discussion

Postby Mark » Fri May 08, 2009 5:34 pm

Thread split at Tyrr's reqest
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Re: Proud Leigon Specs and Discussion

Postby Tyyr » Fri May 08, 2009 6:15 pm

Is there any way we could move all the discussion and specs over to this thread and just leave the fic in the other one?

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Or I could just show a little more paitence.
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Re: Proud Leigon Specs and discussion

Postby Mikey » Fri May 08, 2009 6:21 pm

:lol:
Yeah, between Mark and myself, we managed to collect enough brainpower to merge two posts. :P

From here on out, I think it would be pretty self-evident that story commentary goes in the other thread and stats/specs commentary goes in here.
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Re: Proud Leigon Specs and discussion

Postby Tyyr » Fri May 08, 2009 6:28 pm

I appreciate it.
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Re: Proud Leigon Specs and discussion

Postby Tyyr » Fri May 08, 2009 6:33 pm

Not to be overly picky but... the fic itself is all gone from the other thread aside from one part of one chapter.
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Re: Proud Leigon Specs and discussion

Postby Mikey » Fri May 08, 2009 6:48 pm

Tyyr wrote:Not to be overly picky but... the fic itself is all gone from the other thread aside from one part of one chapter.


I just went to take a look... I think it's all there. Three separate posts, right? If not, I'll check in with Mark.
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Re: Proud Leigon Specs and discussion

Postby Tyyr » Fri May 08, 2009 6:51 pm

Yep, all there now. Perfect.
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