Proud Leigon Specs and discussion

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Deepcrush wrote:The shields seem a little to strong for my taste. But, then again, given the time and size... it might not be a bad stretch.

Overall, I love all the detail you have in this.
I toned down the weapons but left the shields where they were. They're definitely over where a simple scale up of a Sovereign would be.
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Tyyr wrote:I toned down the weapons but left the shields where they were. They're definitely over where a simple scale up of a Sovereign would be.
See, I liked the weapons but was unsure about the shields.
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I'll take it into consideration. Nothing is set in stone just yet.

I updated the specs with the small craft and fighters of the Monsoon.
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Tyyr wrote:...I updated the specs with the small craft and fighters of the Monsoon.
Personally, I'd suggest putting all the stats in a separate thread called "Proud Legion Specs" or somesuch. It would make it easier to check the specs while reading the story. :)
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Probably not a bad idea. Not used to posting fic in a forum.
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Tyyr wrote:Probably not a bad idea. Not used to posting fic in a forum.
Just a suggestion. :wink:
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Thats a good idea. IF possible, could a mod split the threads to move ideas about the specs with the specs to a home of their own.
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Yes, please do.

Maybe one thread with just the fic and another "Proud Legion Specs & Discussion"?
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Thread split at Tyrr's reqest
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Re: Proud Leigon Specs and Discussion

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Is there any way we could move all the discussion and specs over to this thread and just leave the fic in the other one?

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Or I could just show a little more paitence.
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Re: Proud Leigon Specs and discussion

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:lol:
Yeah, between Mark and myself, we managed to collect enough brainpower to merge two posts. :P

From here on out, I think it would be pretty self-evident that story commentary goes in the other thread and stats/specs commentary goes in here.
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I appreciate it.
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Not to be overly picky but... the fic itself is all gone from the other thread aside from one part of one chapter.
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Re: Proud Leigon Specs and discussion

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Tyyr wrote:Not to be overly picky but... the fic itself is all gone from the other thread aside from one part of one chapter.
I just went to take a look... I think it's all there. Three separate posts, right? If not, I'll check in with Mark.
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Re: Proud Leigon Specs and discussion

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Yep, all there now. Perfect.
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