Piece of Elenir (C)

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Monroe
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Piece of Elenir (C)

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Let me know what you guys think. I'm looking for long feed back too :) This *might* be the beginning of my book, as of now its only near the beginning, as the story currently starts en medias res (in the middle) with a flash back.

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Story goes on further from there. Including how he was found, and his early life. The story is told again but from Hardhael's perspective during the second book which explains what the other kid was doing. If you liked this a lot and would like to 'beta test' my first book let me know its available via PM upon request.







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All Elenir stories / characters / events are copyrighted by Ben Monroe 2003-2009. They may not be reproduced in any media form known or to be known in any fashion without the author's expressed written permission.
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