Tinadrin Chelnor wrote:Any background for any of them, the ship, or the state of the galaxy/Federation at the time the ship and crew are in service?
Never been much of a fan for cross-species hybridization, but I know Star Trek has a thing for it.
I agree the Vulcan/Betazoid would no doubt be a bit of a prick.
I'd like to see more Trill. How about a Trill as Science Officer, as you don't seem to have a Science Officer listed?
Tinadrin Chelnor wrote:It would help to know some sort of information about when it is set, and what has occurred in the years leading up to that point.
I would assume being an Enterprise it is still a front-line, advanced Federation ship. But aside from that, what exactly is the ship's role? And what is the state of the Federation as a whole by this point?
Tinadrin Chelnor wrote:I'm afraid I am not much knowledgeable of the STO storyline, I know a little about it but not a lot.
I spend the vast majority of my free time creating my own Universe.
Is the 1701-H in STO? If so, what the heck happened to E, F, and G in the 30 or so years between Nemesis and STO?
Are the Klingons fractured as well? As you said "some of the Klingons" were allied.
I think a male joined Trill as Science Officer would be good.
Tinadrin Chelnor wrote:I have been creating my own universe for many years, I have a lot of information. I'm currently going through a "reboot" or sorts.
However, if you'd like, you can add me on Facebook, as it may be more appropriate to discuss universe-building in a purpose-built group.
I have created one, just haven't got around to doing anything with it, as I don't know too many people into universe building, and it is something that I really enjoy.
There are one or two other people on there, but it would be good to actually start getting things going.
Failing that, I discuss daily with one person via FB inbox our mutual universes.
But either way, it may be better to do that there than here.
Back to this, however:
Here are a few suggestions for modifications: Too many commanders. Some of them should be Lieutenant Commanders. Also, doctors from TNG onwards at least, still have a Starfleet rank. Therefore, I changed the Doctor to a Lieutenant. And I added the Trill science officer, and replaced the Ops Officer with a Bolian. That still makes it a 50% Human crew.
Captain Jonathan Ezra Thomas Smith, Human male, Commanding Officer
Commander T'Sav, Romulan/Vulcan/Human female, Executive Officer
Lieutenant Commander Eugene Brumsley, Human male, Logistics Officer
Lieutenant Commander Ume Tandra, Bolian female, Operations Officer
Lieutenant Thomas Reagan Jr., Human male, Tactical Officer
Lieutenant Carol Marine, Human female, Chief of Security
(Lieutenant) Doctor Vixon, Denobulan female, Chief Medical Officer
Lieutenant Xon Baheer, Vulcan/Betazoid male, Helmsman/Conn Officer
Lieutenant Commander Michael (Mickey) O'Halloran, Human male, Chief Engineering Officer
Lieutenant Darzen Kar, Joined Trill male, Chief Science Officer
Tinadrin Chelnor wrote:I'm afraid there are a great many Michael Estes, lol.
However, my FB profile address is in my User Profile on here.
Alternatively, IM me yours.
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